nice kick man

bass is also very cool in sound - but doesnt have enough highs and mids imo. you have created a good drive. maybe some tougher percs here and there would assist that quite dirty bass in doing its job

also some parts where the percs cut in and out to add variety. like cut the kick for a few bars and re build up now and again.

break comes in nicely. - im not very keen on the synths and the melodies. not very original for some reason - but not generic either.... its hard to put my thumb on..

beat coming back - this works well but the fades could be done in a more effective way. better timing for better build

i think with some tweaking and a few fresher percs this could be very effective on the dancefloor

rich

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I would suggest a more complex melody. I'm hearing everything (arps, pads, bass) moving in the same direction at the same time, and I think it would make the track much more interesting if there was some dynamic to the melody. hope that made sense.

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Originally posted by richg101 nice kick man bass is also very cool in sound - but doesnt have enough highs and mids imo. you have created a good drive. maybe some tougher percs here and there would assist that quite dirty bass in doing its job also some parts where the percs cut in and out to add variety. like cut the kick for a few bars and re build up now and again. break comes in nicely. - im not very keen on the synths and the melodies. not very original for some reason - but not generic either.... its hard to put my thumb on.. beat coming back - this works well but the fades could be done in a more effective way. better timing for better build i think with some tweaking and a few fresher percs this could be very effective on the dancefloor rich

Richard, thanks for your feedback!

Yeah I know the build up needs some tweaking. And I think the whole track needs better mixing too.

This is my first own production ever. The track is about 6 months old. I'll try to finish this later, but now I have some newer productions coming up. I'll post them here very soon..

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I think it would make the track much more interesting if there was some dynamic to the melody. hope that made sense.

Maybe I'll try that.. thanks


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