quite some work went into this one...
genre is a bit energetic technish trance.

hope you guys like it and I would love some critisism !


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Thanks in advance!


(btw if I misspelled critisism please tell me how to spell it correctly )

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Last edited by Takkra on Jan-09-2007 at 17:45

That dirty bass sounds great, love it! Works good with the main synth. Dark, rough atmosphere and a lot of energy! Maybe the kick could be a little, little bit stronger... But I definitely spin to this!


Takere!

Akia

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hey akia
thanks for listening

im happy you liked it

you're right about the kick, after hearing it a couple of times I think i'd should give it a little more power thanks!

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nice kick mate its very powerful. i would compress it a little maybe an attack of 45ms and a release of 20ms @a ratio of 2.5. play with the thresh till it sounds clearer.


loads of drive. mix is good. but there is a little bit of muddiness here and there.

break:- nice low strings. plastic boy style


main lead - i quite like it. its quite fresh. i would turn it up in the mix and up the high eq on it so it sparkls more.

you have a good track here mate. play around with the arrangement and you will have a winner

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Love the basswork. Nice and burpy sounding....(sorry, I dont know the exact term for it )
IMO It kind of had a certain "positive" kind of feel to it, Im guessing it would do great on a dance floor.

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Nice beggining (very powerfull :P) bassline is good, but sound in melody part1 is bad for me, breakdown is good, but where is nice passage between part2 ?? The sound in headmelo in mainpart2 is very good Nice endind

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P.S. i'm waiting for your post about my tune

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very nice im loving this track! do you have a high quality version of this track so i can use it in my dj sets? (320kbps or WAV?) cheers

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thanks all for listening !

richard, thanks for the pointers, still got to clean up the track a bit I know the kick comp. works really well thanks!!

and dj palm thanks alot im really happy you like it that much, ill talk to you about it on msn!

coldblack thanks to you too im also happy you liked it!

Sunclyder haven't seen you in a while man! im sorry if you didn't like that lead sound, but I thought it fitted really well thanks for listening, ill comment yours soon!

and to SPAWNmaster also thanks for listening, glad you liked the track ..

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lovely edit of this track... nice full sounds..something i lack!

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thanks spliph! I listened to yours, it did sound full !

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Hey Takkra,

Digging the bassline, but not so much the leads that follow.

Your break down seems good too

At 3:45, i like the rhythm of those leads.

But maybe try adding some more effects to your track, it can make a big difference.

Peace

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I agree with richg seems to be some muddiness "here and there"

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