Sounds really nice! Great atmosphere and that vocalsounded synth is awesome! I like it!


Takere!

Akia

Listening - really nice percs & FX to start off with - like that breathy little build up....good bassline & full sounding pads coming in..liking this,reminds me of early 2000 prog a bit

Was expecting more to happen in the breakdown and rest of the song in terms of melody - maybe another one coming over the existing pads & synths for some variation at the end...but overall i enjoyed this - your percs & FX really stand out for me

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Thanks for the comments.

Usually i would add something later, even creating a chord progression, but i felt i wanted to do something different this time.

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Ah, I love those phased pads..
I think this is experimental in the sense that you combined ethnic sounding percussion with raw electronic sounds. That combination does not work for me unfortunately. I like some of the individual elements, like that phased pad, but as a whole they do not seem to blend well.
The track is a bit too static and symmetrical as well, I expected something new in the second half.

Anyway, I know you're a good producer, this one just didn't cut it for me

Hey Subtle,

First of all, thanks for your reply on our track. I just listened to yours and I am impressed. The drums in this track are lovely, the sounds are choosen very nicely.

I am just missing a change of bass and melody after the break to give the track more drive and less predictability. Progressive can be really good even when you keep it minimal but then it should only be a 6 or 7 minute track and not almost ten

Cheers!

Thanks Nomen and Tor, your feedback is very much appreciated. I expected much worse critics on this one.

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Hmm the choir fxes are nice.
The precs are good.
My first impression is that it sounds a lot like Derek Howells on the precs are much more static.
I'm not listening on monitors so I'll check it out again later on.
The pads sounds nice but they are too supersawish.
I expected a snare drop like this:
|----|x---|----|x---|----|x---|-x--|x---|
It fit's the track a lot. It will also give some more boldness to the next bars.
The sparkling fx is nice.
You are still streaching your tracks too much.
This is a 7 minutes track. Please remake it beacuase I'd like to play it with my new cdjs
You need to add a lead that will be interduced in the second break and make the track around 7-8 minutes.

8/10 of now.
Omer

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thanks Omer, was expecting worse feedback from you on this one, and i might take ur consideration into account

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cool tune!!!

like this a lot, dont know y any1 wouldnt!!

good job.

hey mate.

I Must say the track first got my attention when the baseline kicked in, very good indeed. But track seem a bit monotone but then you have done some experimenting on the track so that is forgiven hahahaha J/K, production is great and I cant find any mixing errors.

Kick is warm and deep and so is the bass, but that phasing sound just gets anoying after a while. If I was you I would play around with some vocals, Some here some there cut in a million ways =) but thats just me.

Keep it up mate.

Yours mavve

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thanks Simon_L glad you like it

Hey Mavve thanks for the tip, yes i was thinking the exact same thing.
Playing around with some vocals would be awesome.
But i couldnt find any vocal samples or anything to use
so i dropped the idea.

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