I think the sound quality could be better but otherwise is it pretty good, has a nice flow. Will be interesting to hear with vocals. Keep it up!


Takere!

Akia

Hello!

There's not very much for me to go on here, there are no rules here limiting you to only posting 2 minute samples.

The bass is good, but there's not a lot else to the track so far, is there? If the crackling noises are meant to be there then that's something you should reconsider, as it just sounds like a poor quality sample.

It has potential, but there's a lot of work needed.

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Originally posted by Akia I think the sound quality could be better but otherwise is it pretty good, has a nice flow. Will be interesting to hear with vocals. Keep it up! Takere! Akia

Hey Akia, thanks for checking my sample out. I know the sound quality is not really as crisp and clear as most trance, but I did want the mix to sound raw and unpolished.

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Originally posted by Fundamental Hello! The bass is good, but there's not a lot else to the track so far, is there? If the crackling noises are meant to be there then that's something you should reconsider, as it just sounds like a poor quality sample. It has potential, but there's a lot of work needed.

Actually, your right. The "crackling noises" sounded cool when I first heard them through my (crappy) speakers, but after listening to it on a good pair of headphones, its sounding like a bad quality sample. I added them originally to "roughen the song" a bit. Maybe its too loud in the mix. I guess its all the influence from underground metal, I just love raw sounding production.

I posted the first 2 minutes of the song, there are other elements in the song that come up later in the song. The vocals could also add something to the track. I guess I could have selected a more "interesting" part to upload as a sample.

Im working on improving the track. I have around 5 tracks finished. Ill be releasing them through a netlabel that I run along with my friend.

Hey, do you care to upload a new version? Would love to hear it.

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Oh hey!

I didnt read your post. I have the finished track on another hard drive. Ill be sure to upload it tomorrow.

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