Hey mate, how is it going?

I'm gonna do my "new" pro/contra rating system for this track okay?

here we go:

pro:
+ nice bassline and kick. Maybe even a little clearer bass (try to boost the tone carrying frequencies), but hell, its okay in my ears.
+ the mix seems very clear overall to me.
+ pretty solid synthwork.
+ some cool FX, maybe get even some more inside.

contra:
- It's quite repetitive no? I'd like to hear some more changes to the melody maybe.
- the percussion could get a little more driving for my taste.

Other than that, a pretty sick track. Needs to be finished

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Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de

thanks for the feedback mate as i've mentioned i did it in one day, however since i got the skills to write a descent track, i will work on my next project for as long as needed, you are absolutely right, its been made on quick hand

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Acid synth could sound a bit more raw.

Sounds like it's got a bit of swing to it. Neat effect, but I'm not sure I like it.

I think there could be a whole lot more atmosphere in the break.

I agree with cybernetika on more driving percs. I think they should build a bit faster.

You could also hit more of a climax, IMO. It gets all revved up, but it doesn't go anywhere.

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i like that saw pad that kicks in at 0:28, kind of relaxing. but the change from that to the psy bassline at 0:53 is not smooth. the psy bassline sounds like what the what pros uses nowadays, but it has a bit of reverb? the intro theme at 1:20 is cool and hypnotic, but the tension drops down the lane. at 2:57 something big and massive should follow. yeah some melodies could be added. but not bad for a single days work mate!

good ears, i never thought someone would notice reverb on that bass

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