When I start a new tune I often think to myself 'WOW, this is really good'. But, I am often in for a rude awakening when posting it.

This is not your typical trance as its much slower (120 bpm).

If you have time, please take a listen and give me some pointers if you wouldn't mind. Its only 1:45 right now.

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Thoughts/impressions?

Thanks!!!

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first impression is its too slow, very bland and needs beefing up, make the sounds fatter. the chords and key changes are lush, sound really nice and good choice. however i couldnt dance to this, speed it up a touch, it would make it alot more dancable.

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Originally posted by HarryMoore first impression is its too slow, very bland and needs beefing up, make the sounds fatter. the chords and key changes are lush, sound really nice and good choice. however i couldnt dance to this, speed it up a touch, it would make it alot more dancable.

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!

I was a bit concerned about the speed, but I wanted something a little more laid back and a bit less aggressive. Can you be more specific on the bland and beefing up comment? Also, what should sound fatter?

Do you feel this is all a matter of the instruments I'm using? Do you have any advice on specific items?

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Awesome, dreamy atmosphere! I don´t think it´s too slow, if you don´t want it as a dancetrack of course, otherwise is it a really nice, chill track!


Takere!

Akia

Thanks, Akia! I think I'm leaving it at that BPM for now.

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