8) hey guys! hows it going, did it last night. heres link below

[distant_voyage]
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[dark_eclipse]
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Last edited by [nxx] on Feb-17-2007 at 14:30

Both have nice atmospheres but I think Dark Eclipse sounds a bit flat. It starts good but lost my attention after a while, think you need to add more to it. Distant Voyage otherwise is enjoyeble! Nice melody and an great break! Keep them both up!


Takere!

Akia

Inspiring trance that reminds me of the best of the late 90s with some other epic trance elements thrown in for good measure.

I'm with Akia on this one... distant voyage was pretty good, but dark_eclipse had a few moments that seemed ho-hum. The breaks are epic and melodic, and the synths themselves the kind of cheese that I like.

Dark Eclipse had an okay melody, but the mixing seems a bit off. Try compressing the kick more and taming the pads around the same frequencies. Eq seems a bit off overall, but I see what you are trying to do, and I like it. You also need to work on the bassline. Lately, I've been compressing the bassline on the same track as I've been compressing the kick and it seems to be getting the job done for me well without sacrificing too much CPU. You might also want to put a few more mid to high range frequencies on the kick to give it more punch instead of roundness.

Otherwise, I'm loving these tracks.

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8) hi akia, B_man, hows it going
thanks alot for the suggestions and opinions.