this definitely has some potential

i think it's not the full version yet, but it already contains lots of good ideas and has a nice overall-dark atmosphere. i especially like the layering of the sounds, nice synth work!

now it should not be too hard to make a playable club version, keep it going

i agreee,

compress the kick, make it stand out more, add another drum line with closed hihats or so , to make the track faster.... i recognize some sounds in there reason user?

cheers mate, and keep up the good work

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Originally posted by Spliph i agreee, compress the kick, make it stand out more, add another drum line with closed hihats or so , to make the track faster.... i recognize some sounds in there reason user? cheers mate, and keep up the good work

ok, thank you

no i use cubase and ni komplete

I can just agree with the others, it´s a really nice start. The dark melody and atmosphere are awesome but it still sounds empty. I think you need to add more things to it. Very nice so far though, keep working!


Takere!

Akia

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Originally posted by Akia I can just agree with the others, it´s a really nice start. The dark melody and atmosphere are awesome but it still sounds empty. I think you need to add more things to it. Very nice so far though, keep working! Takere! Akia

thank you

ill try do add more things

Wow! I love this... it's minimalistic and brooding. Very powerful to me. True, I think that the song can go places more than this... but it's up to you to take this track there. This is wonderful material to work with.

Initially, the kick does stand perfectly, but the pads and basslines start to muddy it up a tad and take away from it's initial power. Depending on whether or not it's going to be more melodic or hard or not, you might want to compress it farther.

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Originally posted by B_man Wow! I love this... it's minimalistic and brooding. Very powerful to me. True, I think that the song can go places more than this... but it's up to you to take this track there. This is wonderful material to work with.

Thank you