i like the chords..very nice pad..it flows nicely..the lead is good too but if it was my track i'd change up the lead a bit..it sounds nice though

cheers

quote:

Originally posted by System101 i like the chords..very nice pad..it flows nicely..the lead is good too but if it was my track i'd change up the lead a bit..it sounds nice though cheers

Thanks. How do you mean? Melody wise or sound wise? Can you be more specific?

quote:

Originally posted by Eldritch Thanks. How do you mean? Melody wise or sound wise? Can you be more specific?

maybe use 2 octives..randomize some of the notes a bit to give it that nice flow so everything doesn't follow the same notes..use a uniqe sound that people will remember the song by.. of curse these are just my suggestions..jsut some ideas you coud try out..

and a trick that i use that 95% of the times works:..
if you don't know how to use the black notes or if you want to move the song up or down a pitch higher try moving all the notes "3 notes" up or down..(count the black notes as well) it always surprises me how it changes the whole mood of the song..

i hope i helped a bit

cheers

This is incredible man, good job. Both the melody and sound is great. Dude, keep me posted.


oh, and i wouldn't change anything.

___________________
BP

thought it was great. might just want something at the very end of the melody. A note change that really pulls the emotional chord...hard to explain what i mean as i have no music theory whatsoever.

Really good though. would like you to pm me when this is done...

___________________
Listen to and download all my tracks at www.gregnicot.bandcamp.com

not bad at all!

___________________
Help me make soundtrack for my grandpa´s art exhibition:
Check out my topic about it here
Thank you!

i'm assuming it is Virus you're using? not bad! Like the chord progression and melody.

Great start, finish it!

___________________

quote:

No one wants to die. Even people who want to go to heaven don’t want to die to get there. And yet death is the destination we all share. No one has ever escaped it. And that is as it should be, because Death is very likely the single best invention of Life. It is Life’s change agent. It clears out the old to make way for the new. Right now the new is you, but someday not too long from now, you will gradually become the old and be cleared away. Sorry to be so dramatic, but it is quite true.

--Steve Jobs (1955 - 2011)

not bad !

I'd raise a few note here and there from minute 1.06 to 1.10
good start keep going...!

Thanks guys, I will definately make a track out of this. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.

quote:

Originally posted by emc^2 i'm assuming it is Virus you're using? not bad! Like the chord progression and melody. Great start, finish it!

Actually, it's all Reason synths.

There's nothing all that weird about this melody. It's actually rather moving. Keep it up.

___________________

www.jexmusic.com - My website

beautiful!

___________________
www.soundcloud.com/rinster