i updated the old version since it had a lot of mastering problems... plus i changed a variety of things like the bassline, more percs and fx's etc.. anyway would love to hear your opinion about it


Title : Carnival
Original Artist : John Marks
Remixed By : Exceed
Genre : Trance
Kbps : 224
File Length : 4:26
File Size : 7.12Mb

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Thanks a million!


Bidor

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Nice intro, I like the dark, mystic feeling! Maybe the sound is a bit muddy. The short vocal samples in the break are great! Good job so far!


Takere!

Akia

Hey Bidor,

This is a very dark track. Not a happy carnival this time? :P
I like the overall groove however things are very minimal. I think there could be more elements to fill up the mix. And the lead synth sounds kinda muffled, I think this could get spiced up a little.

Good luck, keep it up!

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Originally posted by Akia Nice intro, I like the dark, mystic feeling! Maybe the sound is a bit muddy. The short vocal samples in the break are great! Good job so far! Takere! Akia

Thanks Akia!
i think with muddy you mean the track is trippy?! hehe glad you like it!

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Originally posted by cybernetica Hey Bidor, This is a very dark track. Not a happy carnival this time? :P I like the overall groove however things are very minimal. I think there could be more elements to fill up the mix. And the lead synth sounds kinda muffled, I think this could get spiced up a little. Good luck, keep it up!

hey Cyber! hehe i dont actually know why the tune is so dark... its ssomething i came up with.. im eager to know as to what kind of elements you would like to hear in the tune. ill see what i can do on the lead synths.. thanks for the review,

btw im still waiting on a package from you!

hehe keep it real.


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I dont know what else could be inside, I guess more synths in the back would be nice, maybe some short stabs to support the groove

anyway, check PM

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Originally posted by cybernetica I dont know what else could be inside, I guess more synths in the back would be nice, maybe some short stabs to support the groove anyway, check PM

ill see what i can change.. thanks for the suggestion!

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i agree with cybernetica, it feels like it could do with more in it lol. not a bad song tho, work a little more on your production skills and get everything sounding a lil more crisp.

if im not mistaken, im pretty sure i made the midi for john marks - carnival on nonstop2k.com lol

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Originally posted by AniG if im not mistaken, im pretty sure i made the midi for john marks - carnival on nonstop2k.com lol

true hahaha.. and you made the notes wrong!

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Originally posted by Takkra true hahaha.. and you made the notes wrong!

i got the original midi from "John Marks" himself, believe it or not.

btw i didnt even know about that site untill you posted it, thanks!

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8) hi bidor! nice to see another track you did

[0.01] nice start bassline
[0.07] fx is cool there
[0.24] kicks in, nice distorted lead type there
[0.40] break, nice lead
[0.54] vocal is cool 8)
[0.58] kicks in, lead sounds nice
[1.25] kicks break, lead flows nicely
[1.45] kicks back, nice trippy percussions there
[2.15] nice flowing
[2.26] leads back. nice fx around there
[3.08] vocal
[3.13] kicks back
[3.28] trippy perc back
[3.52] nice fx there
[4.10] towards end, nice distorted type lead
[4.22] nice boom
[4.25] end

8) i really enjoyed listening. its real heavy.
theres alot going on. keep up the good work!

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Originally posted by Takkra true hahaha.. and you made the notes wrong!

i know it was wrong, someone was supposed to edit it lol

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