This sounds really nice! Great, driving kick and an atmospheric melody! I think this one is the best I have heard from you, well done!


Takere!

Akia

Yay! Another [nxx] tune (I wish there was a way to pronounce that).

Off the bat, we've got a killer kick and bass segment. However, you should work on the kick just a little more to make it come out more in the mix because the kick sounds a tad hollow. The kick becomes especially hollow as the synths start their more and loses it's power.

You might want to EQ the elements of the track better because they sound muddy and the high frequencies of the synthesizers are way too loud, so you might want to pay attention to your levels some more.

Good breakdown. Nice sawpad (they never get old to me). Now for the late 90s cheese to make a significant comeback -- YEAH, that's the kind of melody that gets your adrenaline pumpin'!

When everything comes back, the muddiness and loss of the better kick frequencies kill the track. You are going to have to tame all the other elements to give this track the proper edge that it deserves.

You have a decent draft of a driving melodic stadium track... now you just need to spend some more time in the mixer. I like your style, bub, I am not trying to put you down.

Cheers.

PS - what equipment are you using?

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8) hi akia and B_man. thanks alot for the comments and review 8)

Hey.... I like this track.... Good feeling in it.... but as others said, its little bit muddy.... I think you should work on the intensity of those saws and little compression on kick and bass should be done..... then everything comes back.... every sound clash together.... coz i get lost lol but i like the melody tho...

I think this has alot of energy and good melody... you could do better i guess

Cheers

Agree with the others. It's a very good track per se.
I really love the kick and bass section, those sound very tight.
But you should do something to make your lead more clearer, I think a boost in the 3-5 kHz range shouldnt hurt anyone

Keep it up!

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hey mate reviewing as i listen,

nice kick.. i noticed a lot of reverb at 0:30 maybe turn that down a little bit. 1:15 the lead starts of nice. you need to work on the mastering, the treble is to high. 2:34 nice break. i love the lead in this. nice reverse crash at 3:00, plus again the lead is nice. very uplifting. nice outro easy to mix in with other tune. overall i enjoyed the track but you need to work on the mastering. 7.5/10


keep it up!


Bidor.

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8) hi akia, b_man, avengie, cybernetica, bidor, thanks for the
review and advices. well after reading, today i went and tuned it clearer. i gave the synths some space between them and less muffling. the hifreq is lowered, and synth is bit relaxed now.
well i gave it a go. version2 is below 8)

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Love that build up

awesome work dude, think ill put this in my next mix.

great uplifting/epic vibe.

8) hey DJ Patski! thanks for the comment.
sure, you can mix it