just need some critique done on my track. though it's only less than 2 minutes long, it isn't the final version. i can take constructive critiscm, so feel free to speak up. thanks.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=411785
(9-27-06 sample)

Sounds really promising! Awesome melody and aery atmosphere, I love the part 1:23! Would like to hear the full, finish it!


Takere!

Akia

thanks for the feedback Akia.