The track is updated and finished so far in my eyes .. put a tad more emotion in it

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Thanks again for you time

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Original message Now do not be misleaded by the sweet title, I dedicated this song to a special friend of mine who talked me through alot of difficult times, we developed feelings for eachother and what not.. but "we" could simply not be. .. (it's true!) Everything still sounding *ahh* "sweet", but this girl is pretty wild and crazy herself, but on the other side also very, very intelligent for her age This track, however short and maybe simple sounding to some, should give a nice description of her character.. I hope you will discover some emotion in the track because I made it with a lot of it enough for the bla, here's the stuff. [ click ] A comment would be nice, and it would, ofcourse, be appreciated a lot Thanks in advance!

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Hi Takkra.

Listen all track.

Nice stuff. Good job mate. !

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Enjoy!

thanks man! ill check yours out!

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Awesome! Really driving, you just can´t deny it

Great track I am not too much into the tech stuff but I like it.

Cheers guys !!

thanks for listening!

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you have improved tons buddy
great percussion work! nice'n'bang'n.
not a huge fan of the synth that comes in 2:30ish, but just personal taste.
great job

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whoa. gee thanks boss

I can remember you were the first one ever to comment on my very first track

glad you liked it!

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Originally posted by Takkra whoa. gee thanks boss I can remember you were the first one ever to comment on my very first track glad you liked it!

haha, u got a good memory

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hey sexy.

nice new version you have here. mixing is good though a few of the percs sound a bit loud in the mix.. also i feel that it feels a little too clean. maybe add another slightly detuned mirror of your arp synth. this will fill up some empty spaces and give it more of a fullness. i like the sounds at 4:04. now the track is sounding full but maybe make some of the sounds more wet with efx/reverb. i thyink the main thing about this track is the arrangement. with a more designed buildup/break main and outro the track would make a killer tune on the dancefloor.

overall great as i expected champ

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Nice Track man!!

Bassiline is ok! And hi-hat very bad.

But track is ok!

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thanks for listening you two!!

rich thanks for all the pointers Ill take that in advice when I renew it..

northstar, I knew the highat was bad but SOMEONE suggested a techno'ish hihat haha

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