My new choon i just finished a little bit ago. I got in a good groove last night and this is what came out of it, about 6 hours straight with the occasional smoke break. I really enjoyed it and hope you do too! Was trying to get alot of energy in it let me know if i succeeded or not.

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This is cool, but I think it needs a bit more variation. I like the break down, but there doesn't seem to be any build up to the drop afterwards, and then everything seems slightly muddled afterwards. Keep working on it though, it has great potential.

I agree with flextown, a lot of potential in there but couldn't really keep my attention for very long. Variation is the word

Keep it up!

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Thanks for the comments! That seems to be a big problem for me, I don't know how to keep it interesting...

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dropped you a pm!

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wanted to let you all know that im working on a remix of this tune,

something to look forward to lol

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Originally posted by Bidor wanted to let you all know that im working on a remix of this tune, something to look forward to lol

Hows it coming along?

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hey guys, here's the remix~! let us know what you think!

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Cheerio


Bidor

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