hey mate.

this is very nice and warm. it reminds me of the summer. kick has a nice thud. a warm happy yet subtle atmosphere is there too.

i think this would work well a little slower. for the progressive guys. the bass and kick will definately work the ibiza beach

i think you should utilise a more open sounding synth on top of this. maybe a real guitar with huge reverb/delay? not sure. but something to create a theme on top of this.

good work mate

rich

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Listening.

Very heavy on the kick there.. and where are the percussions ? i hear little drive in the track, it gets better at 1:40, but still i could wish for more, i like the main theme on this one, reminds me of some Body Shock tunes, although, you could add a break with a subtle piano coming in, and then disappears when the track kicks back in.

Overall, your on to something here.

Oh, and btw.. nice Artwork, the picture really fits

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Originally posted by Subtle Listening. Very heavy on the kick there.. and where are the percussions ? i hear little drive in the track, it gets better at 1:40, but still i could wish for more, i like the main theme on this one, reminds me of some Body Shock tunes, although, you could add a break with a subtle piano coming in, and then disappears when the track kicks back in. Overall, your on to something here. Oh, and btw.. nice Artwork, the picture really fits

Dude, that's real de 14, a really interesting place in Mexico,a ghost town .

Kopi =o.

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hey mate, reviewing as i listen..

pretty groovy! i like it.. 1:00 cool lead... i like the congo's on the background.. the melody is simple its a bit repetitive.. maybe try and add some more percs in the beginning and some open hats when the lead jumps in. sounds good, needs a bit more work!

7/10


Bidor

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