Hello Promotion forum!
Usually I loiter around the production forum, but as I finished a track (having very good advice from the good people of the production forum) I thought I'd better post it here, so as not to clutter the wrong forum

Your welcome to download it and I hope you enjoy! Reviews are welcome, I may not change this track again, but I'll definitely take comments into account for the next one
Or alternatively, if you don't have time/ can't be bothered, just listen to it!

Link: www.soundclick.com/kitphillips

For people who have already heard the last version, this one has a more beefed up kick drum, more variation in the hi hats (its not that noticeable but it may add a little more interest subliminally) and also a slightly more rounded out ending...hopefully.

i gave it a quick listen...

i didnt really hear a kick drum at all?

sounds a kinda cluttered and overwhelming...also could use more variation as it kinda drones on...which is ok depending on what it is that's doing the droning, but this seems like more a laid back chill type track and the droning gets too drone-y after awhile.

Did you listen to it on laptop speakers? I just tried this and there was no kick AT ALL! At first I thought I'd accidentally muted it or something.

ya, i should have mentioend they were lap speakers...

i can't hear your sound :/

greetings

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Originally posted by Sunclyder i can't hear your sound :/ greetings

The streaming versions sometimes aren't any good, I kept running out of buffer when I tried, try actually downloading it (click the icon with the little down arrow) instead. Its working for me when I do it this way so hopefully it'll like you too Its not half as good as your stuff though m8

I really think you improved a lot since the previous version. The ending I felt wasn't abrupt at all this go around. The only problem I think it has now is the extended breakdown and no build up - there was no real climax to the song.


Still, I enjoyed the mellowness of the song quite a bit.

For a first track, great stuff!