The kick could use a little eqing around 800hz. It's sounding a bit muddy. I don't think the sine subbass fits the kick so well. Maybe a different sound to fill up that 40-400hz region? I don't think the guitar sound before the hihat needs to be fatter and could use some low end. The main guitar arp could use some brightness to it. Very progressive feel, but still driving the whole time. I'm really enjoying all the sounds in this track. I think you could use a better reverb to really place all the sounds in their perspective spots in the stereo image. They all seem to be in different spaces and don't mash together. The mixdown could use some fixing as you said, but I really enjoy this. I like this a lot. I think another main lead could really bring this track out with that same melody just something bigger and some more pad work. You have this one synth that has too long of a release and doesn't fit with the rhythm. The outro is a bit too long imo. Overall, great track and with a few improvements I think it will be a storming track! 7/10

Thanks Lindo for commenting and listening......i am making changes.....btw for the ppl who are trying to d/l, i reposted the tune at a different site.

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http://download.yousendit.com/638A3DF923291076