hi ppl!
been workin on this track fr a bit and wanted to share it with u guys and get ur opinion on it as it will be highly valuabe.
All feedback is welcome and greatly appreciated!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=677309

cheers

p.s. there are 2 versions one with an Indian vocal mix(eastern classical)

Some quick comments:

- this track is fairly well mastered. The kick is nice and crisp, the synths aren't muddy. It's not quite to the level of Human Blue but definitely good enough to pass as a professional production.

- the vocal sample is fine but you overdo it very badly. After a while I wanted the guy to just shut up . I would pick your spots for the sample a bit more carefully.

- synth stabs are okay for a little while in the beginning but there's little development for the first half of the track and it starts to get boring.

- the pattern that comes in after the breakdown is nice initially. Perhaps it could be developed a little bit.

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thanks fr the listen bro!
i agree about the vocals myself!
is just a str8 recording i did in my room with a singer will edit parts from it and probably use autotune on them!
and cudnt agree more with ur comments on the rest of the track! will definately work on it more!
but as of now am working on a different style altogether!
and am posting a new track on the forum!

Thanx again and Peace