well...i know everyones thinkin i killed a classic, but i thought i was bringin it to an interestin twist. i had a great idea on what to do, and i started to do it. i had the full intention of werkin on it from beginnin to end. unfortunately, my fruityloops killed it. for some odd reason when i imported the melody sample and cut it into fruityloops, it didnt save. i had it on a slicer channel and was workin on it late. i got tired, slept, woke up and the slicer channel was there, but no sample. i loaded up the sample again, and it was messed up. long story short, i cant redo the melody like i had so here is the unfinished project. i know that the later kicks are funky, and i was gonna fix that, but i didnt...


i know it sounds pretty bad towards the end, but i just want your opinion on it. was it worth goin through with it? i thought it was, i thought i was a addin a different flare to it...


http://artists.iuma.com/site-bin/mp...It_Back_Cut.mp3


comments? complaints?



any feedback is appreciated...but give me more than "this sucks"...i wanna know y u think it sucks...


keep in mind this was a rough version i was doin before i started tweakin and tightenin it...

I don't think I'm gonna listen to it.

Not only did you commit an unholy deed by remixing Xpander but you admitted it was crap. Why even bother?

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"Sucks", if you wanna know what sucks then :

Kick
Synth (not sure i can call it this ehehhe)

Those are the only two elemts in the tune, im assuming this is a piss take right ?

Edit, i just read ur post and it seems you are serious about this, ok ill give you some constructive feedback :

Tunes with just 2 elements for more than 5 seconds gets very boring, this actually does this for like 30 seconds. The kick is thin and pissy, try making it more snappy then adding a "Bass" drum under it. Get some percussion in there, some FX, a bassline, delete that synth and start a complete new tune hehehe.

Take care

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Originally posted by burns "Sucks", if you wanna know what sucks then : Kick Synth (not sure i can call it this ehehhe) Those are the only two elemts in the tune, im assuming this is a piss take right ? Edit, i just read ur post and it seems you are serious about this, ok ill give you some constructive feedback : Tunes with just 2 elements for more than 5 seconds gets very boring, this actually does this for like 30 seconds. The kick is thin and pissy, try making it more snappy then adding a "Bass" drum under it. Get some percussion in there, some FX, a bassline, delete that synth and start a complete new tune hehehe. Take care

i was serious, but after battlin with fruityloops to reimport the damn samples i quit. i didnt add any elements but a few. i just wanted to hear what people thought of the melody. it was a rough under draft if you will. i dont really add tons of elements when i work right off the bat. i make the 'essentials' and then work over that. i WAS gonna add more, but after fruity ate my sample, i said forget it...

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery I don't think I'm gonna listen to it. Not only did you commit an unholy deed by remixing Xpander but you admitted it was crap. Why even bother?

unholy...hehe...yeah i know...admitted it was crap cuz i didnt get to work on it...i need a new friggin comp that runs fruityloops right...