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Hey mate,
listening...
the intro sounds experimental, the idea with increasing pitch to total frenzy is not bad.
kick and bass sound GREAT to me. they take no prisoners 
in the beginning you have a great layering of sounds... then the tune gets more minimal again with some beeps and stuff here and there. Pretty random, a little without direction I feel. I think you should sometimes try more layers, as I see you can do it pretty well!
Now joining the hard acid SeaWasp sounds. Cool stuff now.
The melody came by surprise. It is a little too loud but otherwise not bad. I like it.
Then comes the part where you distort the melody, now its too loud, and soon stuff gets a little too random for me. Although the melody changes every now and then.
The part with the noise in the background is class, but when all stuff comes together, things get a slight bit muddy.
You have a solid sound overall and a lot of good ideas, but even though you intended this track as experimental, I dont really dig the random direction stuff is heading. i personally think this track needs more of a structure. Good, Keep working!
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Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)
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