Listening

First crash was very cool

Like the syth panning delay at 60 sec.

Bass is nice and deep...powerful


Snare doesn't seem tight enough

All the sounds so far are clean and clear.

seems to not do too much before the break...maybe this is what you want

syth at 3:42 deosnt fit with the others well imo

break seems a little too long

Lead syth after break seems a little thin. But nice

I like this track overall maybe just a few adjustments

Hope this helps

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Hey Alex,

Nice track you have there. Will give thoughts as I listen.

Melody at 1:55 may need to come down in the mix slightly (Might just be personal taste.

The rolls before the track kicks back in, I notice that you have a loop that repeats twice with the kick. Might want to look at doing that only once. It doesn't seem to give anything by having that twice.

Once the track resumes it still sounds a bit thin but you said it's not completed yet.

Overall really nice track, keep up the good work dude!

Cheers
Nem

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Hey guys, thanks for the comments, what does everyone think of the melody?

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