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| quote: | Originally posted by Nemesis44
I have to disagree with Magnus slightly and state the I think the weakest point is the kick. It's getting swamped in a load of other frequencies and does not cut through the mix enough.
I actually think that you have obtained a base for a nice sounding mix but would definately encourage you to take another look at your EQing, if you find that you are ok with that then take a look at your panning as this may assist.
In terms of structure the break is far too long, if you are going to keep people hanging on for that long it really has to be worth their while to wait and this track doesn't kick off enough once it resumes to justify the wait.
That said, I still think this is a top piece of work especially for a guy who has just started producing.
All the best my friend.
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Thanks for the feedback! Good to get some criticism too. :)
Yes, the kick would be better. Maybe I'll change it.
About the break, I'm quite happy about it and don't think it's too long. The main melody goes through once.
Longer version of the remix can be heard here:
http://www.virb.com/johannessuominen
-Johannes
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