Really nice track, the fx really suit the track
and give it a nice touch... and the synths are
really great. good job friend.

i like it.

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Hmm sounded alittle loud on my sony mdrv700 headphones but then again my fast track might be alittle. you need more percussion your previous tracks sounded much better then this one.It sounds like there was lack of time put into the track :T.I mean dont get me wrong nice sounds and stuff you need better way to introduce your elements.

hi guy thanks for your comment here is update i have made on my track

http://www.sendspace.com/file/uysgwb


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Listening to updated track. i would add some reverb on the strings... or maybe very little delay. im not sure why you did that volume decrease after the first minute... i think ppl should be able to hear the whole track, well especially djs. but ppl can move forwards and backwards themselves .
the problem with the percussion i think is mainly the hihats. it might take some of the song's originality off, but i would with a more traditional offbeat hihats on that. I really like the pad on that happnes sometime after the second minute. and the swell fx there too.. you need to variate the bass... it is just the same throughout the song. it gets redundant after a while.
... then the sound quality overall needs a little cleaning. it sounds cracked. is it too looud?
but i think this track has great potential for progressive trance once you smooth it out a bit.

could you check mine out please?
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...0&forumid=74&s=

Sounds much better but still alittle loud .