Hi, im a new producer and this is the first track
i find the courage to post here

Nothing too fancy in this track, kind of 'Pakito'
style going on. This is still a draft of the
finished version so comments and suggestions
would be hugely appreciated.

Take a listen and go easy

http://www.yourbeats.com/mybeats/nhance_163.mp3

(used FL7, 140bpm, 128kbps)

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En eshei ipothesi! pareta tziai en kamneis! hehe

The beat is surely better this time! I just believe your melody could use some changes through out the built up...

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It is alittle muddy.You need better builds and you need to eq most of those synths.Sounds like theres alot of verb on your bass and you can bareley hear it.It is alittle repeative try doing a counter melody or something .Although not bad for a first track . Practice makes perfect :P

toulaxisto emena en sosto to link sto signature mou re

thanks for the feed, i appreciate it. keep them coming
i'll work more on this track, hopefully i'll make something
better out of it.

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lol

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I like the bell sound! And the melody is very nice but as godsendxd said it is too repetitive. Keep working!


Takere!

Akia