I would like your comments on a track I am currently trying to produce...
The link : http://www.aweb.gr/pre-beta.mp3
I would like your comments and suggestions...
How about the layer @ 2:50 ? Sounds strange... I am not very keen on it anyway :P
It is only the first 4 mins of the track... The rest is still not done

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no comments yet?
come on TAs... please...

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shit not bad. need more production

ok when it starts, with that noise, its very vert annoying man

add some more percussion or something, use a better kick also

it goes on for nearly 2 mins sounding exactly the same

the synths that come in are too weak
and the notes are off aswell

sorry man
i didnt like this at all

its really bad IMO

hope u can take bad feedback aswell as good feedback man

peace

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bad feedback is important to improve myself
keep on telling me your comments...

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I agree with more precussion.. I recommend lots of hi hats and stuff. Plus, the arpeggio'd tune is pretty repetitve.. it doesnt really change from when It comes in. And this results in not having a real melody to go along with the arp. Sounds alittle more old school technoish than trance to me. dunno if you were going for this or what.

I wasn't supposed to create a trance track...
I am more into a tech-progressive one...

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