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I really like the way you brought everything in. It was original and unpredictable. The transitions are nice. I like the bass-line. Interesting blend on the voice.
I'm not sure about when you make the wood-block voice that's doubling with the bass louder. There's something that holds me back from knowing exactly how to groove to it. I'm wondering if it's got too much release on it. Somehow that same rhythm and melody works for the bass-line but for me personally not so much for the wood-block sound.
Now it could be that I'm just out of genre. The whole thing has experimental aspects to it so perhaps it's something that fits but I'm just not accustomed to it.
Overall I think it's a cool song. I like the tone on your lead particularly.
I'd love it if you could tell me what you think about my song Eve of the Invasion.
Thanks very much, Agent Starchild
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Agent Starchild
Durham, NC, USA
Those who share the wealth of their knowledge will end up far wealthier and more loved. Those who use their knowledge as a throne from which to sneer at others will never have a true friend.
Tracks-in-progress (Please help me make these better):
Eve of the Invasion
The Realm of Possibility
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