http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/88942

I don't feel like getting it hosted, there it is.

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It also went wrong.

Thanks alot! What's wrong with it?

Well, for starters, if feedback is what you're requesting to begin with, state so in your original post. If that is your intent then it is nice to give some information about the song you've created, and what your intentions were with it. Also, if you intend people to put effort into reviewing your work, you should also put in the effort to present it. The statement "I don't feel like getting it hosted, there it is" led me to believe that you don't even care about your work. I don't even understand the statement, really, since Newgrounds seems like a fine place to present it.

It's also nice to give feedback on other's work as well. For future reference, if you post a track for review, comment on a number of other songs and those people will be more inclined to review yours.

Keep on truckin'

Dr. Sheiskov's vile mixture brings giggles to his inner child.

Calling this jazz is like calling Kenny G psy-trance (and Kenny G isn't even 100% jazz himself). This is more like a video game poster clip for an anime platformer game... it's ASTO boy getting jiggy with some level 1 action in some lunar block-moving post.

Then you almost start getting hardstyle by the time my brain is melting out of my ears and pouring into a bowl for cybernetic dogs to lick up.

I dunno... this is some very cheesy, farfetched, and musicall unsatisfying crap. It's SOOOOOO close in a few ways and SOOOO far in others that it looks like the cat-dog character from some bad Nickelodian flick.

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...yikes, and I thought I was being harsh.

I dont hear any jazz in it.... this sounds like music for a scene where a cat is about to go take a dump in a corn field....

Seriously... do you know what Jazz is?

LOL

I do know what jazz is, but it's kinda hard to swing/incorporate jazz into trance. Perhaps Jazz was the wrong word.
What's close? What doesn't fit?

Yikes, i just noticed all the posters in this thread are from the United States. HAHH

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Well hey... the US was where the roots of jazz were replanted and sprung (primarily in the New Orleans).

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