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Not bad at all imo
If I can offer advice
Main thing to do is cut it up a bit, good melody progressions but make them a bit more distinct and clear. Maybe by cutting out the bass/percussion/lead at a few points separately or entirely. Eg the bass is 'on' nearly the whole time, maybe fade it out in the middle and have a breakitdown, or just jump the bass back to that electro/treble/distort riff thing you begin with, and then build or kick straight back into the melody. Doing something like this or something similar would make it sound less like a lot of pretty noise and more like a coherent song that sticks in your head after you've listened to it only once
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