hey guys heres a new tune, spent 9hours straight yesterday to finish the song.. when i started making the song i had no intention at all to create a full tune.. my friend asked me if i could make a loop file of 1min for his website.. hehe i ended up liking it to much and used it for myself

i would really really like some feedback on this!

so please! i will return feedback!

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Thanks!

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Last edited by Rinster on Aug-01-2007 at 11:01

auaaaaaaa.....it's a joke??

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Originally posted by Sunclyder auaaaaaaa.....it's a joke??

what are you talking about?

cheesy house at its best.

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Your not staying in key! Arrangement is good. Not too fond on the bassline. I have to say it, not your best work mate. Production quality and percs are good but your melodys are not the best. doesnt catch my attention. You pretty much got everything down with production accept for music theory. Once you get that down and know what notes sound good after eachother you'll be on top man.

Try this out man, take all your notes and bass line and what not and change them to all black keys. I'm pretty sure its not actually a scale (correct me if im wrong) but they wont be any off keys if you do this.

Check this bad boy out...
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=360771
I use this scale the most.

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Originally posted by gwrmarines Your not staying in key! Arrangement is good. Not too fond on the bassline. I have to say it, not your best work mate. Production quality and percs are good but your melodys are not the best. doesnt catch my attention. You pretty much got everything down with production accept for music theory. Once you get that down and know what notes sound good after eachother you'll be on top man. Try this out man, take all your notes and bass line and what not and change them to all black keys. I'm pretty sure its not actually a scale (correct me if im wrong) but they wont be any off keys if you do this. Check this bad boy out... http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=360771 I use this scale the most.

well it was kind of the idea to have the off keys notes like that, i wanted to go for something different.. i dont know what to classify the song as.. house was the closest i think.. hm i think i expected to much of this, thought you would have loved the bassline.. anyway ill sent you the pack maybe you can do something with it.

cheers mate,

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Originally posted by Bidor well it was kind of the idea to have the off keys notes like that, i wanted to go for something different.. i dont know what to classify the song as.. house was the closest i think.. hm i think i expected to much of this, thought you would have loved the bassline.. anyway ill sent you the pack maybe you can do something with it. cheers mate,

Yeah it just threw me off, i was like wtf haha its cool though. Yeah man send it over yander i'll mess with it a bit.

I havent got around to that one song i was working on. I'll send it your way in a lil bit!

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Hi Bidor!
Is It house really?? I dont think so...

meybe..but better hard experimental elecro house

btw, good technically track but its not my style...

main melody chmm... not revolutionally...
it seems that You meybe did experiments
synth used should be better..

overall for me 6/10

cheers