Hey, just took a listen. I think this tune would really really kick if it had more wetness. Try putting some good sized verb and delay on the lead. Some of the sounds seem very dry in the breakdown.

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Thanks for the reply. I should look it up.

Cheers

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Hey there,

I agree with verdonsky on that it needs a lot more reverb and maybe stereo separation for some width and richness. The percussion seems overpowering too. When everything kicks in at 5:39, the song seems to lack energy. I think a fatter lead will do you good to keep things sounding full. You might be able to try increasing the decay and sustain of the lead to get longer notes. The bassline in this sound is by far the best I've heard in a while.

Good work. Just some minor touchups.

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Hi! Yeah more reverb and it's will be cool track.
Bass need little low cutoff...i think so...
some syths should be louder.. the piano also.
overall track has potential...

for me its: 7/10

cheers