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That supersaw lead in the 2nd part doesn't fit the overall mood of the track - sounds too happy for me! A deeper, less intense sound could work better imho. You could play with the chord progression of the piano-ish pluck a bit, i missed some dynamics with the harmonies.
Otherwise, superb work with the strings, great arrangement and flow. Nice master too.
Quality stuff 
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