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It's hard for me to tell because I'm listening on a pair of crappy earbuds at work. I think the lead melody you have is a little overbearing and simple. The instruments do not compliment each other very well, although some EQ-ing might help that a bit. I hear some more subtle sounds in the background that sound cool.
For having only been producing since Feb., it's not bad dude. Keep refining it bit by bit.
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