ummm...I don't know how to say it, but...keep workin on it...good start...better than I could do...oh wait, I don't make tracks But overall...just keep workin on it and see what you can come up with

Bear

sup guy...good start in your song and the 2 melodies blend in well--bravo this is pretty hard...for me anyways...
first of all, the second synth you used came in too soon, you need percussion to gradually build up to the clap..in your case you used the clap as a snare to build up and thats cool but after you used a big pause and that makes the song a little choppy...
also while making your track, and keep in mind you want to make it mixable...follow the 4,8,16,32 triangle trance format...triangle meaning build up from the bottom and as you reach the peak break down to the bass...
its kind of hard to tell you what you need cuz its only 53 seconds of the song..make the full version and i can give you more feedback but all in all i think you did well...=]