Nice melody, catchy! I like when the bass comes in 1:56 but maybe the kick could be stronger. Think it goes a bit too repetitve after a while, maybe you could add another melody after the break 4:50 to keep it interesting. However, it would be fun to dance to this!


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Akia

Thanks Akia, yeah, I see what you mean...anyway it was intended to be just a funny track so...glad you liked it and thanks for listening

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hmmm..... i listened your tune...
so...its not bad... just somes corrections ....

beggining - try to fade bassline becouse is to loud... this synth really good...melo is nice....

breakdown.... really fast all is good...at 3:24 i need breakdown... 1-2 min. later is to monotonny...for me...

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