Hello, just picked this out at random, actually its quite good im liking it alot, very gabriel and dresden, the multi tone bass, the synth work and pads are really good. more vocal variation and mastering and more elements are needed but hey what a great start to a track.

Keep it up
Terry

Thank you for the feedback. You're right, it could use a bit more work...

well you cant really legally use the vocals lol but other than that its pretty good

Actually I can provided the track is meant for internet play or a as a part of a demo...