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Okay, where to begin...
You still have a lot to learn... Sound is bad, it's mixed terribly, all the synths are way too loud, it's a total mess, there is no clear lead in the track, structure is almost non-existent, some stuff is out-of-sync, what the hell is that clicking, percussions sphere goes beyond the clap, u know, and i could go on and on, but it'd be pointless, because...
We've all done things like this when we were learning, and every piece of crap we've produced sounded like the next dancefloor-killer to us.
I'd suggest you take a look at the music production tutorial-masterlist, it helped me a lot, and you'll definitely learn a lot there.
It just takes time and a lot of effort, and success won't evade you 
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