Wrote a remix on legendary tune (basic dawn - pure thrust nu-nrg rmx). Check it out and leave feedback.



Artist.....: Wolf24
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Genre......: Trance
Style......: Trance/Psytrance
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Quality....: 192 constant kbps / 44.1kHz / Joint-Stereo
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Size.......: 7.94 MB
Length.....: 5:46





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Last edited by MegaMan on Sep-20-2007 at 02:52

Hi mate, I'm listening.

Nice short reversed FX in the beginning.
Kick and bass sound quite convincing. I would prefer a less heavy kick, but dont change that, thats just my thought.
The buildup works well.
The closed hihat is too static. Turn its volume down and add another hihatline on top of it with alternating volumes then its less obvious.
I think the breakdown is pretty good but something is lacking. Maybe a pad or some strings?
Your melody synth is good, I enjoy how you emphasize the main theme with different synths and come back to it again and again.

Ok now to what I feel the tune was lacking.
You eventually need a little more fundament to fill the mix.
That is, like I suggested, some strings or a pad. It also could be some low stabs. Warm, organic FM-Sounds, maybe simply another percussive element.
I think its great that you included some nice effects into the sound, they already add a lot of depth, but theres still need for more. You could also add a slight reverb or delay on some of your elements, all will help with creating a fuller sound.

Good job, I liked it.

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Hey mate, i like the beginning.

The bass is great, until u drasticly changes the notes, and the melody is very cheesy, and u need to replace that open hi hat.

It would be cool if u got rid of that melody and made ur own track out of it..

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thanks guys.

i am looking forward to create a perfect tune that will rock TA

P.S. btw mate, i wouldnt mind sending you a nuendo file, its only like 16 megs zipped so, you could rape it one night while having a beer

Preset for Taupro is also open for useful speculation, although the bass is usually setup according to the frequencies that kick shares with the bass.

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Last edited by MegaMan on Sep-21-2007 at 03:34

Yeh, the break definitely needs more atmosphere. Go for one of those high-pitched string pads, methinks.

My most prominent issue with the closed hat is that it stands out too much. I realize you're trying to even out the spectrum, but IMO, sound takes a front seat to the spectrogram, and that hat is way too loud. You might go for some variation in volume so that it only punches through on the offbeats, but the rest can be at a more matching volume with the rest of the track.

I like the effects. Very trippy.

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I agree with the rest: this track needs more meat in it. A pad of sorts would help a lot and maybe also another lead that would take turns with the one in the track now.

I like the drive and the bass . Very energetic. However, the delay on the bass seems to go slightly out of sync when the bass is transposed. Maybe intentional but it put me off somewhat.

Nice job otherwise!