Listening.... I like the bass/syths but I thnik they need to be mixed better. THey seem to loud for the mix. Need to turn up the kick so it stands out more. Track seems a little flat. needs some drum variation and more precusion. Syth at 2.10 or so might need to be a different sound. Maybe shorten it a little and have the transitions happen a little sooner. Just my 2 cents but I am pretty new to production so I might be way off base


Best,
Justjabbin

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Justjabbin


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Thanks for the feedback...I think you were right, the synths were a little overwhelming and drowned out some of the percussion, etc.

I edited a little, changed some levels and cut out the intro...should be better now!

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the bassline needs to be more dynamic, make some changes in it.
the melodys didn´t like it, are to flat, the idea of the track its great! but needs more work....
is this the final version? hope not... you can make it better always

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Made a couple of changes...check it out now...Trimmed it down a little, so it should flow better.

Cheers!

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