new track for all tech-trance fans. hope u like it. some feedback will be appreciated...
regards,
firework
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Oct-01-2007 12:24
Mr Kre8
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Newcastle, England
The percussion seems perhaps a little disjointed at the start. You have some nice ideas but they dont seem to link together. Loving that harsh piano stab thing. Very nice. Goes quite well with the bass. Snare roll doesn't do the rest of the tune justice as a transition into the next section and the offbeat snare doesn't fit with this section. Some nice synths especially the gated one and a pretty cool bassline. When the stab comes back it just doesn't work at all, it's the wrong pitch.
Pretty good tune, some minor adjustments needed imo.
Originally posted by Stereoid
thanks for feedback. still learnin
hey friend, thanks for feedbackin my track. heres mine
many ideas going on in your track. maybe a bit too much.
i dont see any clear buildup (something that builds tension) if you know what i mean.
bassdrum and perc is cool. i like it when the heavy kick bounces in.
clap is way to muddy to my taste. would like to hear something with more smack there.
the stack sound you introduce at 0.40 is very good, together with the bassline it sounds übercool.
1.40 get rid of that sound. doesnt fit imo.
the sound that comes in abit later around 2.40 is way better. very dark and gritty. i would build on that sound and dedicate it a long breakdown with rising and falling reverb decay and stuff like that.
your mixing/sounds is decent. you just need more work on the arrangement.
Oct-01-2007 18:20
justjabbin
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2007
Location: Sacramento, Ca
Agree with both comments above...IMHO maybe to many elements here. Try to use less elements and have them the build on each other. This will help with arrangement
