Gabriel Cazali - Semper Fi (original mix)
hey whats up, am new in this forum, am from guatemala
i want it to show you a track that am working on it right now with Alex hentze, a huge upcomming producer.
so here is the first versíon of this track

hope you can tell me what you think

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cool bass man.. try tweaking it up a bit
i like the flow

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Originally posted by Leon Oziel cool bass man.. try tweaking it up a bit i like the flow

thanks
Albino 3 rulez

any one else?

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yeahh, nice track u have to send it to labels right now, good job,

Bebop.

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Originally posted by djbebop yeahh, nice track u have to send it to labels right now, good job, Bebop.

thanks bebop !!!

i will send it to neuroscience for shure

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alright Gabriel lets see what we got here:

if you're going to have a stacatto pad, put something legato behind it so when it moves, it's not a change in atmosphere but a change in key. make sense?

bassline fits well, kick seems a bit over driven but maybe that was intentional? it works, just expected a lil different

lead is quite pretty -- i would put an analyzer on the bassline and see where in the mid range its frequencies lie and then put an analyzer on the lead, i have a feeling they are both hitting the 1khz-2.5khz area kinda hard, maybe try and eq one higher or lower to see if the lead/bassline breathes more.

other than that, this is quite good, keep up the good work

A

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Originally posted by Zombie0729 alright Gabriel lets see what we got here: if you're going to have a stacatto pad, put something legato behind it so when it moves, it's not a change in atmosphere but a change in key. make sense? bassline fits well, kick seems a bit over driven but maybe that was intentional? it works, just expected a lil different lead is quite pretty -- i would put an analyzer on the bassline and see where in the mid range its frequencies lie and then put an analyzer on the lead, i have a feeling they are both hitting the 1khz-2.5khz area kinda hard, maybe try and eq one higher or lower to see if the lead/bassline breathes more. other than that, this is quite good, keep up the good work A

thanks Anthony, i have to admit that i only make the track on orion, render and thats all i do, no mastering process or anything like that.
thanks for the really good advice

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what's orion? i'm guessing like cheap monitors or something -- regarldess, slap on some headphones and take a listen, you should be able to hear the eq the track needs(although i don't recommend using headphones for eq purposes) and EQ'ing is not a form of mastering... you want that stuff taken care of before you master!

good luck

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Originally posted by Zombie0729 what's orion? i'm guessing like cheap monitors or something -- regarldess, slap on some headphones and take a listen, you should be able to hear the eq the track needs(although i don't recommend using headphones for eq purposes) and EQ'ing is not a form of mastering... you want that stuff taken care of before you master! good luck

no men..... orion its the software that i use to produce
http://www.synapse-audio.com/

and no, i will never use headphones,
and for shure, let me work on my EQ and post it later.
thanks again really

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the track really seems to lack direction. i like the sounds you used in it though.

i prefer tracks that have a lot of drive and fullness i think you could add more low end to this. a sub bass would work well.

i like the sounds but it does get repetitive after a while try adding new things and taking other things out.

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Originally posted by sterilis a sub bass would work well. try adding new things and taking other things out.

oh thanks for this!!!!
we will make some changes to it, in the new version
thx !

the sub bass its a good idea :P !!!

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