I like the Corsten-ish distorted-digi lead and the other lead that you used in the build-up. Smart choice of timbres.

The bass has a nice place in the mix that doesn't meddle too much with the kick - I like that. It's pattern is also well thought out.

The choir/string melody has a good idea in mixing up the standard melody with a few chord ideas. The majority of this mix reminds me a great deal of late-90s trance that I was a big fan of.

For the most part, I think you did a masterful job. It does expand on a number of cliches, perhaps too much for comfort, but at the same time, the timbres have that electro flavor to them that is more up-to-date as well. In some ways, I have a loss for words to think critically about this piece.

Keep up the good work!

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