not bad. your melodies are good but your synths are a little textbook. main lead is a little weak for me.

keep it up

one of my fav alltime tune s man so i really enjoyed it...cheers
and i think the sounds overall were good

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not a bad little remix here...good choice of tune to remix or cover so to speak

quite hard housey...hard dance sorta thing...very my style

keep up the good work dude!

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Originally posted by KilldaDJ quite hard housey...hard dance sorta thing...very my style

yeah mine too mate.

have you listened to my tune Take Control on the myspace page?

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Lots of energy here! The synths are good and the melodies build a great tension... the tempest of a chase-scene. You took a good amount of artistic liberty in re-composing the melody (which I remember well). I like that! However, perhaps it could have been louder and had a breakbeat laid over it. A bell sound was appropriate, given that it was originally a sine-wave synth... but since you are going for a harder-style track, maybe you should experiment with a harsher bell timbre -- or a timbre that can be automated to become harsher.

Good work, overall...

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Originally posted by B_man However, perhaps it could have been louder and had a breakbeat laid over it.

Thanks for your feedback. I only avoided a breakbeat section because i had previously used one in my last few tracks lol

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Sounds good. I lovde the original and I'm glad this is a different style to make it a worth while remix.

Thew leads don't quite stand out enough for me. Need more punch. I love the pad type synth that comes in halfway through the breakdown, in fact the melodies are great, not exactly like the original but compliment it perfectly.

Actually I really love the melodies you've got goin. I'm not keen on the standard offbeat bass line. Would have prefered somethin more driving. The bass makes the tune sound too bouncy and slow for the leads. A driving bass would have been much better for this. Other than that, a good remix!

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