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Actually, the problem isn't the kick, although I can see why it would sound that way to a lot of people. It could probably use a touch of compression and maybe some EQ to thin out the sub-lows, but really I think the kick is fine.
The real problem is that the rest of the percussion is practically nonexistent. No groove, no drive. When you've got nice snappy hats, snares, crashes, tribal drums, that sort of thing, they tend to coincide rhythmically with the kick and make the kick itself sound more interesting. Even certain synth sounds can help provide that kind of drive if they've got an appropriate "click" at the beginning. Most of the time this would be a stab, but some leads are able to do this as well.
What I'm hearing here is just a string or pad, a delayed atmospheric kind of arp sound, and incredibly low-volume and thin hi-hats that aren't even playing for most of the track. There's not even any clap or snare, let alone more exotic percussion sounds. Or if there is then I can't hear it.
Finally, even if you totally redid the percussion, you'd still have a problem with the bassline. It's not an incredibly original bassline but that's OK; more importantly, there's very little separation between the bass and kick. They're both around the same frequency band, same volume, similar rhythms, and fall on the same beats. Now, it sounds like you might have picked a Vengeance kick which tend to hog a big part of the spectrum, but you can still compensate for this with EQ, timing offsets, compression, and of course rhythmic variations. Or if you're a lazy tool you can just bass-duck and pretend everything's OK.
Mastering will not fix any of these problems. Mastering does not in fact fix any problems, it just makes the track and little louder and occasionally darker/brighter if you want it to. If you even need to ask whether professional mastering could benefit your track, the answer is no, it can't. You'll know when a track is ready for that stage.
Don't fret over it too much - it's a common problem. My drums sounded a little bit like that too when I first started out.
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