Hey,
I'm currently working on a tune and trying to make it into a crowd pleaser. I have decided to go with a guitar riff over some trance structure. Do you think it works??
Also, any technical advice is greeeaatly appreciated. This is a clip that has not yet been mastered.
SIDECHAIN THIS: http://www.myspace.com/moodshaper
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=730095&songID=5932099
Thank you !
Last edited by moodshaper on Nov-13-2007 at 21:55
Nov-12-2007 19:26
Spliph
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: CTA
keep practicing, layering, structure, EQ... you'll get there
It has alot of potential. I like that guitar haha.
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Nov-13-2007 06:51
mark_gg_daniels
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2007
Location: Londinium
cool track - like the guitar thing my friend.
Nov-13-2007 21:51
moodshaper
tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2007
Location: Toronto
Thank you for the feedback. Can you let me know what needs work the most? Is it eq or layering or the structure?
Nov-15-2007 02:47
3F05Q
is a horrible artist name
Registered: Sep 2006
Location: Seattle . . . . . Skill Level: Mediocre At Best Clothing: Sometimes
I'm not one to rank the importance of such things. But, in this case, I'd say work with your EQing a bit. Could be the myspace player, as usual, but when things fill up some nice key elements get pushed a bit too far back.
