this is my new track. ive been working on. some feedback would be good to see if anyone has any interesting pointers for it

Artist: Sterilis
Title: J.A.C
BPM: 140
Style: Uplifting Trance

UPDATE

cheers

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Last edited by sterilis on Nov-14-2007 at 17:38

A really nice track, awesome melodies! But I have an opinion: I think the main melody would be loader, now is the fx´s what you hear most. Like the synth that plays around 3:30! And that in the break, so nice! Keep it up!


Takere!

Akia

Killer track man! The melody that comes in at 4:50 is awesome, it moves me haha. Keep it up mate!

I like Symtoms too.

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hey mate, youve improved quite a bit since the last tune i heard.. yeah man im feeling this tune.. nice arpeggio at start.. awesome background melodies.. maybe try and put some choirs in the breakdown.. now that would be awesome haha.. man everything was good untill the Qlimax!!

what happend there? .. your missing a element to give it that extra groove.. dont be afraid of using the pads in the qlimax aswell!!

it lost its goodness after the breakdown, please work on that!!

overall was a really good tune, before the qlimax 8.5/10

after 6/10.

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Heya,

I think this track sounds pretty spot on. Still has some mix down issues but in terms of structure it's sound as the best of them.

Some good melodies in there, but I am with Rinster on this as the track fails to deliver at 3:55 when the main part resumes after the break.
When I was listening to the breakdown I was thinking, yes, yes yes.... oh!

Naturally you are the artist and it's not my job to tell you otherwise if you are happy with how it sounds.

I would playlist this if it had more of a bang when it kicks back in.

Was definately feeling this.

Cheers
Nem

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thanks for the feedback everyone. yea the climax was rushed a bit. i have plans for that dont worry

im trying to decide what to add into it. ill keep you all posted.

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Originally posted by sterilis thanks for the feedback everyone. yea the climax was rushed a bit. i have plans for that dont worry im trying to decide what to add into it. ill keep you all posted.

im glad you will..

defo bring in those pads in the qlimax.. maybe a higher octave, try it out

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added the updated version to myspace

cheers

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Wonderful track... it is harder hitting than most uplifting trance, which I like. I love the throbbing bassline, and the melodious breakdown.

I love the whistling/howl pads after the break. They seem perfect in the mix.

I was definately feeling this one as well.

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thanks for the comment

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Hey dude, excellent sounding tune here. The energy is outstanding all the way through, the arrangement and sounds are great. I love the bassline, it really pumps. The melody didn't grab me too much though, it's good but doesn't have a real hook to it. Overall an awesome tune though, keep it up

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wohoooooo what a track...

hehe one of the synths sounds like cats on drugs.

the melody is wicked man, let me do a remix