hey guys,

here a tune made by Chris Crossland and myself.. quite happy with the results.. but we want to have your opinion on it.. feedback will be returned!!

enjoy =)




Chris Crossland & Rinster - Evolving Beats (Original Mix)
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cheers,

Rinster

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no genre listed

starts off techy so im guessing its techno. percussion and kick sounds well.

sounds as if theres going to be a ripper of a bassline to get introduced around 1:23 then it goes really chilled out and disappoints slightly. i was expecting a marco v - loops and things bass and melody.

after the breakdown it loses momentum. from the beginning your expecting a fast flowing track as you must realise.

my opinion is get a ripping bassline. lose the chilled out chimey sounds and go for a rougher sound to suit the track. the melody, bassline and sound don't seem to fit in there. i'd decide whether you want to make a chilled out track or a tech-trance monster and change accordingly.

in terms of production though its good.

good luck!

sterilis

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Originally posted by sterilis no genre listed starts off techy so im guessing its techno. percussion and kick sounds well. sounds as if theres going to be a ripper of a bassline to get introduced around 1:23 then it goes really chilled out and disappoints slightly. i was expecting a marco v - loops and things bass and melody. after the breakdown it loses momentum. from the beginning your expecting a fast flowing track as you must realise. my opinion is get a ripping bassline. lose the chilled out chimey sounds and go for a rougher sound to suit the track. the melody, bassline and sound don't seem to fit in there. i'd decide whether you want to make a chilled out track or a tech-trance monster and change accordingly. in terms of production though its good. good luck! sterilis

Thanks for the feedback mate, our intention was to create something different.. we tried to make a somewhat techno/melodic & chilled tune.. but i think your idea doesnt sound bad either, and i think ill work on a second mix.. thanks again man for bothereing to leave some feedback.

cheers,


Rinster

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Ahh, i forgot about this one!

Dude, maybe you should remake and do a full on hard mix and i'll do a really chilled one. I gotta find the pack...lol

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Hey,
The intro sounds promising, there's some reverb, dunno if it is on the kick, that annoys me, I would get ride of the reverb on the Kick though.
The hats sound a bit looped,in the overall song, I would try to get a better loop, or to programe better the Hats .
I concur, I was expecting a monster tune, with big fat sounds, and then with the plucked sound became a bit chilled.
In overall, yes, I would go for a monster tech tune .
But overall was nice to listen to .

Kopi =o.

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8) hi rinster! nice to see another track you did 8)
um wondering who is chris crossland by any chance 8)

[0.01] nice percs at start
[0.12] kicks in nicely. clap level is fine to me
[0.26] percs addon nicely
[0.52] nice rev. like from techno 8)
[1.24] nice fx with kickend
cool bassline 8)
[1.37] nice synth there. flows nice
[2.12] kicks back, flows nicely 8)
[3.00] kicks end, 2nd lead synth introduces
[3.25] another arp there 8)
[4.12] kicks back, all leads fits well 8)
[4.xx] nice flowing 8)
[5.51] towards outro
[6.11] end

the synths all fit well with nice percs.
the bellish synths are nice, i enjoyed listening 8)
meanwhile take care 8)

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Originally posted by [nxx] 8) hi rinster! nice to see another track you did 8) um wondering who is chris crossland by any chance 8)

That's me.


Thanks for the reviews guys!

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8) hi chris! 8)
great job you guys 8)

Last edited by [nxx] on Nov-16-2007 at 23:32

Thanks for the feedback guys!! much appreciated!!

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Witalsky Bro

Very different tune

beggining is gooooooooddddd
1:48 - 1:49 - bassline is bad for me
goooooooood

3:16 this saw lead ?? is hmmm.......
maybe after the break add something fresh, becouse is monotonny...

anyway awesome IDEA

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[SAN]

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Originally posted by UNITED_MINDS Witalsky Bro Very different tune beggining is gooooooooddddd 1:48 - 1:49 - bassline is bad for me goooooooood 3:16 this saw lead ?? is hmmm....... maybe after the break add something fresh, becouse is monotonny... anyway awesome IDEA Cheeeeeeeeeeeeeerzzzzzzzz [SAN]

hehe glad you liked it mate!

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Track sounds promising. You could add some sub melody between 3 - 4 minutes to fill it up. A bit of change ip perks could help between 4 min and the end. Keep working on it, I'm sure you can improve it! Good stuff.

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