just looking for any opinions/suggestions on this track as i am losing focus on it and starting to questin whether its any good or not. Thinking about scrapping it and going in a new direction. Its been fighting me the whole sequencing process. The tracks 95% done, just not quite finished, missing some polish and other elements.
I like the dark and mystic atmosphere in the background, think it works good with the main melody that is a bit uplifting. Nice vocal. Actually I dig this track! Sounds great to me! Keep it up!
Takere!
Akia
Nov-25-2007 12:22
Kid_presentable
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: May 2005
Location: Sydney,Australia
sounds good! nice choice in vocal too
Nov-26-2007 03:56
Leighton_Tyler
tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2005
Location: Vancouver, Canada
Ah, well thankyou for the positive feedback. Always good to hear. The vocals were sampled from Crystal by New Order. I'll replace it with the totally finished version in a day or two when i finish it off.
hey man nice choice on the vocals. this def has an acid house vibe to it, really not what i'm into but i can offer some suggestions u might find helpful:
1). Increase delay feedback the vocals to carry them out longer? Also i can't tell if ur using a stereo or ping pong delay cuz im on mono listening lol but u may want to try that to add to the spacey feeling of the track
2). try a crazy arppegiator pattern on the lead that comes in at 5:35. again stereo or ping pong delay would be awesome here if ur not already using it. Maybe filter or volume swell it out around 8:00 instead of abrupt end?
i like what u did with the kick in the main part of the song. hope some of this is useful... peace and good luck!
