This is a track im working on right now, im thinking about cutting out the main melody all together and changing it to somthing else. I feel like the track starts out strong, but is lacking in the break down which diminishes the energy. It might be that I have been playing it over and over and over again lol. Any thoughts? Its alright if you think the whole thing is crap too btw.


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Last edited by michaelconway on Dec-06-2007 at 07:30

I think you've done a great job!

My only (uninformed) criticism is that the small break-down and build-up you have before the main break-down and build-up are too close together. You have a break-down and build-up (around 1:20), then the main song gets going for about twenty seconds, and then the second (main) break-down and build-up follow right after. Either do away with the first break-down and build-up or, alternatively, let the song play for a bit longer before introducing the second (main) break-down and build-up.

I don't know much at all about production so don't take what I say too seriously. I do, though, think you've got something special on your hands with this tune.

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Originally posted by cenik I think you've done a great job! My only (uninformed) criticism is that the small break-down and build-up you have before the main break-down and build-up are too close together. You have a break-down and build-up (around 1:20), then the main song gets going for about twenty seconds, and then the second (main) break-down and build-up follow right after. Either do away with the first break-down and build-up or, alternatively, let the song play for a bit longer before introducing the second (main) break-down and build-up. I don't know much at all about production so don't take what I say too seriously. I do, though, think you've got something special on your hands with this tune.

Great piece of advice you are actually right not on the money Id been listening to it for so long I started cutting out section cuz they sounded too long lol.

Edit: Just wanted to say thanks for listening!

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