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Not bad, but not great either.
Your samples are quite tinny, especially the half-time clapper. It would pay to hunt down some better ones or make your own.
The lead synth is quite generic, but works ok, I didn't mind the melody. I think perhaps you tried to change it up a bit too often, at times there seemed to be the same synth playing, with three or four layers but all with slightly different settings - I found that distracting, it could have been "cleaner".
The intro needs a bit of work, I didn't like the start with the synth being the first element, and the other percussive elements coming in very suddenly. You need to create subtle build-ups to let listeners know when the next element is coming - this is one of the things I find hardest myself.
Keep it up, you're getting there!
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