sounds good to me. can't comment about the mixdown because of the low quality sample on myspace but the melodies and ideas are really nice.

like it!

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Hi, I really like his track, some of the sounds are a bit computerish if you get what I'm saying, maybe fatten them out a bit. But apart from that I really like the melody you've got going on, really ambient.

Sweet track!

Flextown

p.s check out my track Strange Land and tell me what you think

im not getting audio, try later.

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i gave 2 of your songs a listen, they have some good ideas, but it does sound computerish as said before. the kick is very weak. the song feels very static. it has good ideas but they sound very cold. I think some more automation would do your song some good. My ear wanted to hear some of the filters on the leads to open up, maybe the amp release level to increase also.

IMO you're just a few steps away from making some of your songs into stuff you'd put in a club. I think your 2 main problems in arrangement are the percs and automation. Changing/Adding/Removing after phrases gives songs a moving feeling but it only goes so far, but i think you should automate something to give it some intensity.

Last edited by Internet TufGai on Jan-18-2008 at 23:06

one world- its got some good ideas and a decent sounds need more variation in the percusion its decent though can be made better!
in between drems on the other hnd sounds awesome, has lots going on and sounds very professional keep up the good work!

Thanks everyone for your comments, i understand what you mean and i will definately be taking everything onboard!

Back to the studio then to enhance my music!!

Cheers guys

reDifine

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